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Emily Adams

 

I really liked the overall design and feel of your website.  It was simple and elegant and I particularly liked the buttons on the left.  It was a bit confusing when you were on that page and when you rolled over the button it turned back into its up state.  It has a lot of good information.

I was not able to access the hobbies page because I didn’t have some plugin and I couldn’t figure out how to deal with that issue.  All of other links were up and running.  I quite enjoyed the crossword puzzle and it was a fun way to learn about your sister.  One final suggestion I have is to somehow put a border around the page.  Some of the graphics seem to be floating out there in space, so a border would help situate them on the page.

Good website!

 

 

Camille Baker

 

I really liked the moving graphics on this module.  I think that the vibrant colors and animated pictures will really help keep the second graders’ attention.  The site is chocked full of useful and helpful information.

I have two suggestions for this project.  The first is to create buttons for the hyperlinks rather than using text.  Along those same lines, it seems to be a rather text intensive site for young children.  It might be helpful to create animations to get the point across rather than using text.

Good job overall.

 

 

Brandy Bellamy

 

What a great, meaningful project.  I enjoyed looking through you photo travels and thought you had some great pictures in there.  I liked how your buttons fit with the theme of your travels.  Further, the airplane on the first page was pretty cool, even though you might want to make it a bit smaller, so people don’t have to scroll as much.

One suggestion I have is to make the “back to the homepage” link a button, so people know it’s a form of navigation.  I really liked how the rollover pictures presented mirror images of themselves.  That was a cool effect.

It might be nice to have each separate page accessible from any point within the site.  It was a bit tedious having to click on the homepage and then another page over and over.

Finally, I thought that the license plates were a great idea.  They clicked to some neat website as well.  Good job on this project.

 

 

Chang, Yun-Shuang

 

Okay.  This site was awesome!  You are obviously an aesthete.  I really loved the colors and the theme of the project.  Your animations were exceptional and the idea to put them to poetry was quite genius. 

The falling shirts game was quite fun.  I went through the game several times and really enjoyed myself.  I liked the timer, the scoring, the audio and the graphics.  It might be helpful to have a button on the game that allows you to return to the main menu.

Again, I liked the jigsaw puzzle game, but I didn’t understand what to do with the magnifying glass game.  It would be nice to have a link back to the main menu.

What can I say, the mazes were just awesome!

Overall this site was absolutely fantastic.  You might want to work on the navigation a bit, but that is just a minor point when considered next to how nice this project is.

 

 

 
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